I hate...i love

by TeAr dROp   Dec 4, 2006


I hate the way you smile
I hate the way you move
I hate the way you talk
It so dirty dude

But the more I hate
I seem to be falling in love with you
And this I never knew

As day went by I got to know you
And my heart now has a part for you
Wishing you will too

I love the ay you smile
I love the way you move
I love the way you talk
Its so lovely dude

But the more I love....
I seem to be.....
Hating you at the end.......

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a good poem, i liked how everything wrapped up in the end, and your scheme was really lovely as well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    Oh yea!!! i love this one!! 5/5... love to hate..hate to love chick!!!! awsome work

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    I loved your consept of how the more you love something them ore you hate it and the more you hate something the more you love it..therefore showing us the interconnection..very nice..but i think the poem could have done without the "dude"..cause that ruined the whole wording for me:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked this poem. I can relate to it. keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Synh

    Is 'will' supposed to be well? I wish you 'will' sounds kinda....wrong. I didnt like the repition of 'I hate' during the first stanza. You can exchange the word 'hate' for other words like 'despise' or' destest'. same tihng with love. The last stanza doesnt fit the flow of the rest of the poem either. I like your idea but you should come back and work on this. It has much potential. 4/5

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