Forest Fire

by Allison   Dec 8, 2006


Ashes falling down like rain
Blackened evidence of flame
Heated passion in the night
Fogged with smoke and dark delight

Flames have danced where grass has grown
Smoke floats where the birds have flown
Grey clouds billow in the sky
All that once lived here has died

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    This is really good! The flow of it was awesome and i loved how you wrote straight to the point. AWSUM JOB!

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    This is very nicely done. I liked how short it was but you got right to it and you made it flow well and it made sense.

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I really liked this poem, it can mean so many different things. well done

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    I love this poem it's amazing, I also love your pic! that's awesome! thank you for commenting!

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I really loved this. For me your word choice embodied the poetic essence of fire. Although the piece is short for me the second half stood out slightly more simply because the firt three lines are so elegant and somewhat beautiful, followed by the final line which brings the reader back to harsh reality, Wonderful 5/5

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