Nightmares

by TravisInABottle   Dec 10, 2006


*this was kind of meant to be a song*

Floating wild, phantom child
scaring me away, pushing me away...
running desire, life to inspire
leaving me this way, pushing me away...

blood is on the walls...
I'm left to crawl...
watch me concede to your name,
push me or i will fall...

so get higher,
and take me down
another step, inching closer,
just four walls surround...

dancing mild, loveless exile
bleeding this way, pushing me away...
life in denial, future for hire,
scaring me away, pushing me this way...

eyes that stare
a mouth that lies open
the past is near
but the future's forsaken...

you'll never see me...
you'll never see me...
you'll never see me...
you'll never see...

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  • 17 years ago

    by hippiehxc

    This is SO good. I love it.

    Love, Gracie Heims

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    The past is near
    but the future's forsaken...

    thas a thing that reminds me of myself tho... but ok..
    its a rlly good poem =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Batman

    OMG...thats so good....*hugs you*
    i heart you, love

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really liked that. It's good that you said it was meant to be a song, but I really think those words work well as lyrics. That's why I enjoyed the repitition. I think it worked well with this.

    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is really good, you can really tel that it's kinda song lyrics, it may sound batter as a song but its great as a poem also nice job 5/5

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