The tempest

by sweetiepie18   Dec 12, 2006


Drowning in a sea full of hatred,
she chokes as the tempest pulls her under,
struggling to the surface she fights to survive,
but in reality no one even knows she's alive,

she resists the temptation, to just let them win,
even though all she wants is just to give in.
the storm is taking over,
she struggles on,
she's lost the battle but the war's just begun.

drowning in his hatred,
she struggles to breathe,
suffocating slowly,
she fights to be free.

but the tempest pulls her under,
deeper and deeper,
till she's so far down no one can see her.

the depths of despair are where she's been taken,
she never knew he could destroy her foundation.
everything she had built, all came crashing down,
while he just sat there watching her drown.

That smile on his face,
a permanent fixture,
all thanks to the knowledge no one can fix her.

He destroyed her completely,
He finally won,
so he sat by and watched her,
he'd had his fun.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenInPieces

    This poem was definatley one of ma favorites. its really sad but u have a way of making it into art!! really great job. 5/5

    xoxo <3

  • 16 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    It was very well written. i could feel the emotion in the words you used to describe your pain. a true work of art by a true artist. great job.

    MBHD

  • 16 years ago

    by Robin

    Aww this is such a sad poem! I loved it though you are extremely talented!! 5/5 for sure <3

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    I reallly like this poem, its ssoo good, i like all of your poems they all have real gd meanings :) i love them all hehe xx

  • 17 years ago

    by redxiii

    Great its awesome someone is always there to try to knock you down but there are also ppl there to try to pick you up and hold you up so good luck i like your style keep it up

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