Winter's Deceit (Haiku)

by Bryan   Dec 13, 2006


Beauty from Winter's
mysterious deceit, from
Fall's lonely defeat.

Haiku is a style that consists of 3 lines with a syllable count of 5,7,5.
subject has to be nature

Bryan Hunt © 2006

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    I like the way you use different styles of writing, not many poets experiment like this.
    this is yet again, a very good piece. It's hard to make a short poem work like this one does!
    beauty!

    ~* Natasha *~

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I really enjoyed this. I love nature poems and haikus have such great imagery. This one had a really nice flow and it worked really well. I had the image of autumn (what we call Fall in the UK) kinda defeating. giving up. Good wording. Enjoyable haiku. :) Keep writing! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is beautiful I think u might want to add other verses to this and make it a longer poem just a suggestion

  • 18 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Interesting and wonderful! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Milo

    Ha i love it keep up the good work

Read All Comments (10)

More Poems By Bryan