What does it take (to be a man)

by Roy   Dec 14, 2006


Going through the same cycle day after day
Each dusk another shade of grey
Working untill my back breaks
making me wonder what it takes (to be a man)

Drops of sweat dripping down my face
Covered in grease, feeling far from grace
The cold factory, wishing i was in another place

Minute after minute passes me by
Effort leaves my body as a sigh
I don't know how much longer i can hold on
For my vigor & energy are nearly gone

Now looking to the ceiling above
My mind drifts toward thoese i love
For them i'll carry on my work
My mouth now folds into a smirk

Knowing i sacrifice for them
They stand by me, in all i am
Finishing up the last heavy metal plates that remain
Feeling that my effort wasn't in vain
I now relinquish myself from the pain and strain.

Retuning home i now did what i had to do
If people would only knew
The hell some men go trough,.. (for the ones they love and families)

- in honor to thoese who work in the metal factory, and my father.
-Roy

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I accidently ave you a 4! should be a 5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Awww, how sweet! You made a poem for your father!
    When you capitalize the "i" it looks even bettter, but...5/5 anyways!

    Take care,

    Ingrid