Only One Who Cares [Lanturne]

by aDORKable x3   Dec 19, 2006


.......Love........
....Hurts when..
....You are the..
..Only one who.
......Cares........

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Lanturne is a style that consist of a five-lined verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Short, true. full of feeling. well done Ciao.

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    No truer words were spoken.

    Nice write.
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    It may be short
    but it was Strong in Words
    I like this.
    This can be a really meaningful Quote also..
    awesome!
    5/5
    MF~

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    A very well written lanturne Hun.. Very sweet.. Well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Virna Estella

    Wow.. this one's nice ciao.. short but sweet and powerful! 5/5 -virna

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