Evil Woman

by RJ   Dec 20, 2006


Face of an Angel
Can easily deceive...
Let your guard down
And heartaches you shall
receive...

Keep your guards up
Up from the start...
Dont let this Evil Woman
Inflict pain in your heart...

She will reel you in
With her beauty and charm...
She will assure you
She means you no harm...

She will consume your world
Demanding all your attention...
When youre needing her love
All you\'ll get is her rejection...

With her gentle touch
You will lose sight...
Of what is wrong
And what is right...

To make her happy
You will do anything...
Gather up all your change
Youre about to lose everything...

Hold on tight.
If you stick by her
side...
She's about to take you
on a rollercoaster ride...

If youre strong enough
Then just walk away...
You'll suffer in hell
If you decide to stay...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was really a god piece. the rhyme, the flow, and the word choice all worked well together. Excellent!

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Its interesting how you transitioned from one tone to another. She's evil, but you decide to save her.. surely not all women are that way? haha

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Very nice flow.. and very good emotion. This was the best by far. Nice work. 4.8/5

  • 17 years ago

    by RJ

    Thank you for the compliment. Just letting my feelings come out... i am just venting... thank you again, RON

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Wow, is this your first poem??
    It's excellent, a far cry from most first attempts on this sites.
    Excellently written with some powerful language that really portrays the emotion in the words..
    Well done!
    5/5
    *Gem*

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