The Voice Within

by RJ   Dec 21, 2006


Why do you expose yourself
to this kind of pain?
You have so much to lose
And nothing to gain?

Two crazy ex boyfriends
That are wanting to fight.
Hell, she doesnt even know
how to make things right.

You already know
that she's constantly lying.
With every lie she tells
Your heart is slowly dying.

It's your fault why she landed
on someone else's bed?!
That should show you her real
character. Enough said.

Youre as crazy as her
If you think that she'll change.
Her baby's daddy thinks theyre
still together; Thats kind of strange?!

Many good women out there
Is looking for someone like you.
So, why be with a woman
that makes you blue?

You need to find someone
with a bigger heart.
She's been doing you wrong
From the very start!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Zavaylah

    You sure u don't live in my neighborhood?...lol..j/p, or shall i say great minds thing alike.

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    I like this one a lot. it just makes sense to me. Plus the wording is awesome. Like, it's how people actually talk. Enough said. My friends say that all the time. AWESOME POEM!!
    -Parker

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    You really have a way of expressing yourself in your poetry. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Ok the flow was a bit choppy., try reading your poems outloud and seeing where they dont exactly .flow.

    But overall great poem! i could feel the emotions and such.

    the rhyming was also done well.

    x33Lauren

    Welcome to PnQ

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Well, well.. all your poems seem to lead to the same path.. same emotional conflict. They are all very good.. I have one to read though still. Good work with this one... I loved the heart. 4.6/5

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