by Michelle18 Dec 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Open your heart and let me in, |
by Jenni Marie
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This was beautiful...really sweet... |
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Wow, this is very very good! i loved it! keep up! |
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Another great Poem. I loved it. The flow was good, although structure lacked, perhaps stanzas would help. Overall great word choice and good use of the words. |