Strong

by Michelle18   Dec 26, 2006


His heart is filled with endless love,

more passion and faith than you could possibly dream of.

his love is sometimes cold and misunderstood,

but no one could understand it quite like i could.

sometimes his words were cruel and horrifying,

but the love we shared was never unsatisfying.

i put forth my effort and gave it my all,

and he would never stand to watch me fall.

if i would break he'd show me the way,

and show me there's always a better day.

when i feel weak and drop to my knees,

i think of him and start to believe.

i pray to god that he'll be okay,

and never have to feel the pain i used to feel everyday.

he's together and broken all at the same time,

he's got so many things running through his mind.

i know this for a fact because im the same way,

i hate this game and i feel his pain.

just make everything right and forget the wrong,

and together we may be the only strong.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I loved the simple formate it made it easy to read. I also liked the word choice. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Hey girl wut r u talkin about when u say u can't write poems u can and u do a darn good job af it !!!!!!!!!!!
    lol p.s my name is brittany and i am 13 i love 2 write 2 some time sit is the only way u can get ur fealeans out read some of my poems and tell me wut u think ttyl bye bye

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    The wording in this poem is very strong...
    it has a unique meaning =)
    one of my favs that you wrote..

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is an amazing poem.. i have nothing to say about it nothing to critique.. its just WOW! i love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    You're a talented writer! i could really relate to this poem, love it!!!!

    *Shawte*