I'm in love with you.

by Freddie   Dec 27, 2006


Should I include this in his Xmas present???

You\'re a cup of Milo on a cold winters day. The bacon and eggs on a warm breakfast tray. You\'re a budding rose in a dying field. Your not the dagger, but the durable shield. You\'re the rainfall in the middle of a drought. You\'re the certainty in a world filled with doubt. You\'re that shiny polish put on an old worn shoe. In fact, you\'re all the reasons I\'m in love with you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Thats really cute! laura xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    I loved your comparisons they were great =D
    Such a cute poem i hope you put it in his present!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dandy

    Omg that's so beautiful...i would definitely give that to your sweetheart! Thank you for the comment on my poem!

    ~dandy~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    I love it it has good flow its a little kookee but sweet

    XOKaylaXO

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good job. What gift is better than words from the heart?

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