Clear The Rain

by Midnight Sun   Dec 28, 2006


Clear the Rain:

The storm outside
Hides my liquid pain
My tears fall in rhythm
With the heartless rain

I need to be concealed
From all reality
This hurt is no good
It reminds me of my mortality

...........

Yes I used to feel this way
But I'm trying so hard to change
But I can only do this
If these tears will go away

Yes I used to feel this way
But I will change only to good
I'm going to get through this
I will be understood

So clear the rain for me
As I dry these tears
I'm trying so hard to beat this
Instead of drowning in these fears

I'm no longer attached
I've broken this earthly chain
I will get through this
So clear this horrid rain

Written for a contest, please r/r/c. Thanks! :)

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Ooo! Very good job. The flow was good. & I absolutley loved the positivity in this. It shows a lot of strength. Great job. Keep it up, Hunny.

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    Just beautiful.
    Wonderful word choice and imagery and I thought the flow and rhyme scheme worked very well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good job. The flow wasn't perfect but the content outstanding. A beautiful write! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Great poem.
    This deserves to win!
    And thanks for the comment.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! You're comments were so sweet, and I hadn't quite gotten that reaction from you in a while, so wow! Thanks a lot! Sorry to make you think this was a comment! lol But in a way it is! heehee

    Oh yeah, never did tell you I like your expression "liquid pain." Cuz whether you meant it to or not it makes the tears sound as if the liquid, and that would make sense.
    Charisma*

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