Moving on

by bon   Dec 31, 2006


I didn't know what has happened or who i've become
All caused by the things that i've done
I gave it my all..I took the risk
But apparently theres something I must have missed
Nothings the same, or how I want it to be
No one to turn to..i'm lost within me
Don't know how to live or what to live for
I wish everything went back to how it was before
It's too late now, i've got to live on
I've got to show some confidence, i've got to move on
So this is my goodbye.. one thats long overdue
My heart has given up, but it still screams, "I love you"

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  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    Great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    A shorT buT beautifuL piecE 5/5 brilliantlY penneD. keeP writinG!

  • 16 years ago

    by danielle

    Wow that was really good keep it up im adding that to my favorites
    ~danielle~

  • 16 years ago

    by repair her heart

    I can really relate to this poem right now.... its hard. i loved the way you made this poem stand out from the rest of the poems that go along with the same subject. it was really easy to follow but at the same time was depth....dont stop writing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    My fave line was
    No one to turn to..i'm lost within me
    i can relate to this poem fully
    chin up

    much love and many kisses,
    bex