I Am

by ForeverYoung   Jan 2, 2007


I am the scars upon my wrists
I am the tears running down my face
I am the cuts upon my heart
I am the lies I hide behind
I am the smile I have to fake
I am the memories I wish wern't mine
I am the pain I feel every day
I am the silent tears I cry at night
I am the lost happiness I once felt
I am the girl whos breaking down
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And yet I am still beautiful
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This is to all the girls who are depressed and sad, who have been hurt and who are broken down!
YOU ARE STILL BEAUTIFUL!! no matter what anyone thinks or says!
love Steph

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Aww I really appreciated this poem and could relate to it immensely. Thank you for writing such a valid, strong poem and realizing that there are other people who can relate to and appreciate what you have to say. It really does help!

    Amazing work! 5/5

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, i loved this poem because its deep and has a true message that i believe well.
    you are so talented so keep writing these amazing poems,
    take care Tara-Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~

    Very repetitive, but very good.
    loved the strusture && the rhythm.
    5/5 keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Aure

    And yet I am still beautiful
    It's a surprising and beautiful ending, it's one of the best poems I've read

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    Great message! I loved how you wrote this poem.."I Am"..Hmm..It's just great!

    "I am the memories I wish *wern't* (weren't) mine"
    -just thought I should point that out.

    Overall, well done!
    5/5

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