Hi Cindy, how are you? I love this poem, i like to think that theres a certain honesty and pureness about it, youre a stong woman Cindy, and i admire you for it. oh, and to read your poems is always a pleasure!

Narc xxx

"She knows that he is waiting for her,
Yet she yearns for another day to play"

I can't say I know this feeling, but my grandma used to say this all the time. My grandpa was waiting for her to come to heaven and be with him. Now she's there, and I know she's happier then ever.
I can tell you miss your husband...I'm keep praying for you, I will.

Oh! I love this piece! ur a wonderful writer. thank you for the wonderful comments u left on my poems. I have a bunch more coming cuz life has been rough for me... thanks for having me on your mind. Ur on mine too. keep it up, i'll just keep reading!

Cindy, another wonderful poem by you so full of heartfelt emotion. Awesome as always! 5/5

Another beautiful and touching poem, Cindy. The depth of your love for your husband - and for life itself, shines through, despite your pain.

Woww. This is very well written. The emotion just flows out of the poem..sadness and love. Amazing how they fit together. Great write. 5/5

The other comments here have spoken most of what I would have said if I had said them first - glad i can then only utter one word or my own; Bravo!!!

This poem has a beautiful flow and it's touching.

Ahh.. its soo sad.. this gave me goosebups.. but its really good.. written nicely with a good flow.. the only thing i think is an optional change is on this stanza

Yet she hangs on tightly to each new day,
Scared to let go, wanting so badly to stay.
She knows that he is waiting for her,
Yet she yearns for another day to play.

you dont need to write play it would soung nicer.. im my opinion to just end it with day.. but besides that GREAT POEM!!! i love it

A very heartfelt poem. this was sad as i read it. very well written of course. a touching piece. xx

This was a really good poem. you got a 5/5 from me :]

5/5. An amazing poem. I could feel the saddness rush through me! I loved how you rhymed the poem. I love poems like these. I think I'll read some more of yours!

I have depression for the longest time now and it hurts, i use to write poems like that and listened to them from my cusin misty B. She is a big exsprssion in my life that kept me here on earth today. I hope if you got depression to you will find it in your heart to stay strong.

5/5... Great work.

Goodjob cindy! ur a great writter!

Hey um.. you asked me to comment this poem but i already have so im going to comment a different one of your featured list i hope thats ok

Very sad write. how short and precious our time is. how we long for out lost love ones. we'll see them again. 5/5

Wow cindy that was amazing!!!!! i loved it, ya it was sad but it was coming from the heart so u can tell it was ur all!!! keep up ur usual good work :-)

This is an amazing piece of writing and I can see that you put a lot of true thought into this
It was very sad yet outstandingly good
spoken outloud im sure would touch the heart of millions
5/5 take care xxxx

It's very difficult losing a loved one to death and we feel that we'll never again find ourselves and be happy like we once were. excellent job 5/5