Dad (revised)

by emptysole   Jan 5, 2007


My sole now torn,
Why did you have to leave,
I'm left in the dark,
All this so hard to believe,

You were meant to help me in need,
And tell me how to live,
Keep me from harm.
The love you were meant to give,

I never had the chance u left so soon,
Me, mum, my sisters were away,
Not knowing your Fiat,
Or how sad you were that day.

It was too late we left you alone,
Bad thoughts that must have gone Through your head,
If only we had of understood,
All the words you had said,

I wish it wasn't so,
But i would give my life to say,
seven simple words,
"I'm going to see my dad today"......

DAD forever in our hearts

©stephen williams

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  • 16 years ago

    by SamanthaRose X3

    Wow.. this really hits home. =[ very good, though.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Six simple words,
    "I'm going to see my dad today"......

    ^ That is seven words, not six. Anyhow, this was a very heartfelt piece. Really well-written. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow this is an awesome poem!
    i especially like the last verse it was really sad yet so deep!
    5/5 great work :)

    and thanks for your comment on one of my poems, I did change it after lol, I knew something was slightly wrong in the beginning

    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job! So sad. The emotions can truely be felt in your words.

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Wow. Just amazing. 5/5 from me. You have some great talent!!.

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