My life prison (extended and edited)

by Tamsin   Jan 9, 2007


Tears through the hourglass
Mirrors in ceaseless sorrow
Infinity reflects, jeering
This is forever
Yesterday, today and tomorrow

Sand streams, delicately filters
Each particle a single scar
Reminders of refused escapes
Tainted crimson
Punishment for fleeing to far

Swallowed up in deafening silence
Thought sifts through pain
Tracing footsteps
Chasing dreams
I fall behind, just myself to blame

I created my life prison
My choices shaped the glass
Bars and shackles
Limits, confines
I can never pass...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda Ghosties

    This is amazing, it definetly means something to me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Hey I really liked this. Very descriptive, emotional and flowed well. My fav stanza was:
    I created my life prison
    My choices shaped the glass
    Bars and shackles
    Limits, confines
    I can never pass...

    Thanx for your comment too :D

  • 17 years ago

    by NottShawn

    Wow you are really good and thank you for the comment i can relate to your work you should check some of my other work out we could relate to each others poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This poem is written greatly, you have a great talent.I wonder where you were hidding all this time,lol. love to see more of your works

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    I really loved this poem. You have a lot of talent and this piece was amazing. I only hope you don't really feel this way, keep it up. 5/5.

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