It's a heart breaking

by Tamsin   Aug 9, 2007


It's a sad smile,
From someone you once knew
Until life took over
Pushed down the path of death
A tunnel that never ends

It's a tear that falls,
Silent and unceasing
Droplets of sorrow
Tumbling into the darkness
Memories lost forever

It's the distant music,
Echoing of broken dreams
Fallen angel
Mourning for the way it was
Before she was torn from grace

It's a heart breaking
The sighing of the winds that weep
For a nameless girl
Her life lost, the last exhalation of breath
Falling away

It's a sad smile...
It's a tear that falls...
It's the distant music...
It's a heart breaking...
It's me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It's a fine written piece, good job. I think the flow was okay. I like the use of (...) in the last stanza.. It lets the reader pause and linger on your feelings. well done.

    Keep up the good work!
    Thanks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kat

    Wow. Great job! :) I really like the last stanza. It's one of thoes stanza's that I won't easily forget. Keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kat~

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I like the way you used it from the begining to the end nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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