Cars (long but sad)

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Shes sitting there so quiet
Watching cars go by
The pain inside must riot
But she knows she must try
Every car she sees
She just wants to jump in front
Make it look like one big accident
Like one stupid little stunt
She has nothing left to hang on to
Her life is so screwed up
The pain just keeps on going
She just wishes it would stop
Sitting on the sidewalk
Still watching the cars go
Just waiting for one big enough
Her story you must know
She acted like she didnt care
What people said or did
Her pain she shared with me
Her burden I must rid
She told me all about it
Sitting on her bed
Screaming, crying laughing too
Telling me she wished she was dead
She has had trouble at home
And her boyfriend dumped her too
He told her on the phone
'Im sorry but were through'
She stayed up all night crying
She loved him and didnt want to cry all day and night
She locked herself in a room
The pain she didnt want to fight
She couldnt help but cry
When she saw her boyfriend near
Everytime she saw him with her
She couldnt help but shed a million tears
He felt so bad that night
When he found her on the floor
He came to say sorry
He got worried when there was no answer at the door
He walked in to find her
Lying on the ground
In a pool of blood
A note is what this young man found
The note went something like this
'Dear my loved family and my boyfriend
This is all your fault
Youre the reason tonight had to be my end
Too my boyfriend how could you
I loved you with all my heat
Why did you have to go?
This is just the start
You were the only thing keeping me here
Stopping me on the sidewalk
I thought that you loved me
But you gave me the talk
Well now that I am gone
You will try to see
That I loved you
But you dont love me'
Thats how the letter ended
But none of it was true
I didnt want it to be over
I never wanted it to be through
But you never showed me
That you loved me back or even cared
Even though we talked
About the pain we both share
You see I am the boyfriend
This girl talked about in her note
The note of the death to me
The one this girl wrote
I wish she didnt leave
Couldnt she wait just a few more days?
So I can tell her that I lover her
And I wanted so bad
For her to stay