My feelings never show

by Michelle18   Jan 14, 2007


My feelings never show,
my heart is sometimes made of steel.
but this time i want you to know,
exactly how i feel.
i act like i dont want you around,
and like i dont want you to call.
but deep down inside my feelings are found,
and they say for me to give it my all.
when i see you my heart just feels so weak,
i dont know what to think or even how to speak.
im just afraid of what will happen if i let my feelings out,
i know i shouldnt care about that or even have a doubt.
i\'ve just been hurt so many times, i want my heart to mend,
so please tell me if i let you in my heart that this relationship will never end.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Annabel

    I can relate to this poem. I think it kind of loses the rhythm at the end a bit though. I'm not sure, all in all it works well though, I think your poems are great!
    :) x

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    This is a good poem that is easily related to. I liked it, simple but nice. The rhyming is good too. =)
    ~ Lainey

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    This is a great poem that i can definitly relate to it was cute i loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I can relate to every word of this.
    Its such an awesome poem, i enjoyed this so much.
    well done, a very good piece
    love, Tara-Kay
    xxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very sincere and well expressed! Keep on writing!

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