by Moon Princess Jan 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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We guessed wrong, |
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Hey! beautiful poem!!! very emotional!!!! i love the last two stanzas! well done! love Mel |
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I love this poem! |
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The title caught my eye and the structure and plot were amazing. i think the first stanza is my favorite, it opens the poem very well, and all the way thru u keep the reader's attention. |
by MiaFairy
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I think this is an amazing poem. its a 5/5. great job! |
by x.Athame.x
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A sad and emotion filled write that touches the heart. The flow and rhyme seem a touch forced, but not so much so that they take away from the content. Wonderful job. My favorite lines had to have been: |