Falling

by Black night   Jan 16, 2007


*I found this and quite a few others in the back of my old school folder from last year, so its a bit different, however it has been edited since then*

Falling.
Falling through this black oblivion.
My life flashes before my eyes,
my childhood,
fighting vast armies
with a stick and a
dustbin lid

school,
my first day,
looking up at the giants that walked around me looking for their class
My first kiss,
an angel on the other end.

I see my friends,
their happy faces,
cheerful laughter echoing around the room.

Then I'm spinning.
Around and around.
ever downward in this black oblivion.

A door appears.
through the blackness it emerges.
It's light radiating out
bathing me completely.

I look back.

They will not miss me.

I walk toward the door
and push it open,
take one last look at my life, and turn.

Home at last.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    Wow that was a really god poem i can relate to it so much right now, they way you said im home ..at last that really finished the poem so well it was really good keep up the good work okay cause you have a talent ive read about .4 of our poems and theyve all been good i really liked this poem so thank you for the pleasent read xxx