She is scared, there is no one out there

by angelina   Jan 21, 2007


She wants to know,
if he really cares.
Her only foe,
is her scares.

She understands,
but doesn\'t want to.
He held her hand,
it felt so true.

He is so sweet,
too good for her.
PLEASE let this treat,
reoccur.

But she knows shes wrong,
he said it wouldn\'t be the last.
trust is gone,
it has never happened in the past.

She did it again you-see,
set herself up to get hurt threw-away-the-key.
Not only physicaly,
but also mentaly.

She shouldn\'t of spoke,
it\'s her fault she feels pain.
She prayed and hoped,
but knew the words of the game.

Not of love,
but of lies.
She is not above,
she just squeezes her eyes.

Her eyes sting,
she won\'t observe.
Her ears ring,
nothing can be heard.

If she can\'t hear,
she won\'t know the truth.
If she can\'t see,
there is no proof.

She knew all along,
why does she try.
Its always wrong,
she tells herself one big lie.

Is she falling in love.
she can\'t feel.
Not even a dove,
would make it real.

If he is real,
oh she wished.
he can seal,
her with his kiss.

She always thinks,
this one is different.
She often blinks,
in that split second he isn\'t.

Her scares,
is her foe.
Does he really care,
she wants to know.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    Haha lol you got one of my old ppoems before i knew what a stanza was. I agree, lol (replying to your comment) I just meant that your lines are short.

  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    I really like that honestly . Different, but you know that isnt always bad. It looks kind of overwhealming to read because of the distance down the page but your lines are extremely short. Other then that I see no errors. Quite enjoyable. Eccept you are quite repetetive with some words. And you spelled a word wrong on your profile. If you ever want any more comments comment any time. Just NO ONE LINERS.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    ''If she can't hear,
    she won't know the truth.
    If she can't see,
    there is no proof.''

    I love that stanza!!
    I thought some of the rhyming seemed forced but apart from that you really did a wonderful job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Great poem. Some of the rhymes seemed forced but, overall is was a good read. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Nice poem, I like the rhyming.