Drips

Amazing!!!!!
having the "drips" inbetween all the lines give this poem something more. having gone through this before, i know what you're saying, and i appreciate every bit of it. great job with the rhyming and it flowed really well!
5/5... and nothing less!

Drip thing was really interesting and i liked it,and don't take it so serious but please write a hopeful love poem,i saw that all of your poems are sad or dark,it's my request,it's your option of course but it would be good in my opinion
Take care
See ya
Laura

Very special and different, but very nice to read too. I enjoyed it a lot!

Keep up the good work!

I love the drip repittion on this. Its kinda like a refrain (sp?). Its quite orignal, i havent read anything set out like this. It made our emotions want to read more - i really like that about this. An excelelnt read, keep it up and i look forward to reading more!
take care
xx

So far this is my fav. This is an amazing one. So original, I haven't seen anything like this. Geart Read!!!! 5/5

marcella