The Exucutioner

by Hurtingsoul   Jan 22, 2007


Vacant eyes in the shadows
The executioner bows
A masterpiece of art he made
A dead soul that will soon fade

His heart becomes more callous from each kill
The art of death always brings him a thrill
Red rum trickles down from the bottle of delight
Onto the body which completes the slaughter tonight

He chuckles at the mourns the family would bring
People only miss their love ones until the telephone rings
"Sir your brother was assassinated in the alley tonight"
It`s comical to watch their faces with shock in the moonlight

He is the executioner with a malicious soul
Neglect made him merciless to the core

Maybe one day he could be noble again
But that promise will only be in vain

plz comment and rate thanx....

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Justin

    Nice... Awesome piece of imagery :) keeep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ALEX

    Hmm.. not sure what this is really about. I doubt you're really an executioner. It's a bit creepy how well you explain how it would feel though... haha. Maybe I just watch too much CSI. Anyways, this is a super poem. I liked the flow of it, and it was easy to read. =D

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    So dark and deep....i love it! You did an awesome job on this! You rock at writing! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by mier

    Dark and haunting... Beautifully written with amazing description... Great flow of words too...

    Nicely written... 5/5 from me... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    That was terrible lol jk great