He's gone

by Kaila   Jan 22, 2007


You know that special feeling
when your feeling so in love
I thought i did too
then he gave me a shove
I thought he was the one
The perfect one for me
But he lied
dont you see?
I hoped and prayed
he wouldn't hurt me like this
then out of no where
I gotta diss
I feel so used and hurt
but you didnt care that you bruised my heart
I'll be on my way though
I'll carry on
As for you though
Screw you your gone

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  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    I can relate this one very well. Nicely done. But I think you should fix the length of sentences so they would be more alike.. Anyway, loved it 5/5
    Take care
    xoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    Hey i loved this !

    Laura
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I'll be on my way though
    I'll carry on
    As for you though
    Screw you your gone"

    What an excellent ending!
    True girl power if i ever did see =)
    Love it!
    5/5
    *Gem*

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