Undone

by LITTLE MISS FREAKING SUNSHINE   Jan 23, 2007


I am an untitled piece of art
I am beautiful, yes
But you can't tell your friends about me
Because I have no name,
No origin, no title
I am an unwritten song,
waiting to bring forth my talent
You want to hear me
But you can't because I have no words
No beat, no backround music
I am undone, unwanted, unloved
I am....Me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Ending is simply beautiful. You said so many deep things with just a few words. Well done, it is so powerful and original poem, you put your self in to it and expressed emotions on truly great way. I love the way you wrote it. It deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Amazing piece, wonderful choice of words. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    That's nice... good job
    :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was awsome. really deep 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine

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