What is It

Amazing poem. so parts are repeative, but I tadds to the charm. Youd di a wonderful job.

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was well written.

My favourite stanza was:
"She wants you,
to hold her,
to touch her,
and to kiss her."

I can really relate to this. It was a great read. 5/5

Kalee

I absolutely loved the last stanza, it was the best. The entire poem was quite amazing, but that last stanza... boy, oh, boy! I loved it. Lol. Great job, Hun. :D one of your best.

I enjoy repetative poems! Eh, oh well. I like the last line and the emotion was true. Great job, and so far out the poems I have read by you, this is my favorite. Keep trying!

Hatori

"She wants you,
to hold her,
to touch her,
and to kiss her."

You wrote "her" 3 times in 4 lines. A little repetitive.

"Is it lust, or sexual attraction?"

^What's the difference?

Describe your subject. Instead of using "She" a gazillion times you can say "this girl" or "this woman" or "One". Widen your vocabulary.

I hate to say this but I will, this poem is not a 5. You were lucky.

3/5.