If You Looked Inside A Girl

Wow hun. Thats quite a deep poem and i loved the flow to it as always.
In answer to your comment, i know this may hurt hun, but if your friend knew that you loved Jake so much and is still saying yes, she's not a real friend. A real friend would not say yes to the guy who broke her best friends heart. She'd tell him where to go =(
5/5 as always
*Gem*

Could i say absolutly amazing. it is so true and really no one ever looks deep down in a girl to see what they are all about they look at the outside and sees her smiling but really they don't know it sometimes a fake. keep the work up you sure have a future in all this. 5/5 as always and i would give you like 99999/5 but thats over 5 haha.
xx.chelseaa.xx

ps. thanks for the sweet comment i wrote that poem quickly its just how i was feeling at the moment but thanks so much hun.

Deep, and straight to the point. You've got talent, and it's well spent in style and rhyme. Great job.

This was truly beautful. And I thought it was very interesting how at first you said that you find deception and lies. Very cool coming FROM a girl, lol. And I loved the line about the face of a boy that once made her whole. Really great phrasiology. You are very talented! Great job and keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun