Anger Inside

by Lucifer   Jan 24, 2007


I sit here, alone filled with rage.
I feel like an animal locked in a cage.
I stare deep at the floor as i get trapped in my mind.
grasping my fist as the red fills my eyes.
Thinking of the many ways i could create his demise.
It feels like he's inside.
taunting my mind.

my first ever poem iv ever wrote and this is the first draft, figured i'd see if im good at this suff
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  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    For your first ever, you didn't do too bad. Keep writing. And make it real (even in the fantasy). I like it..

    Forever more
    -mello

  • 16 years ago

    by bacha

    Gooooooooooooooood work:):):)

    your first work and its the best too:):):) Iloved it:):)

    keep up the good work i really like your poem and i wating for something more:):):)

    khuloodan:):)
    smile all the time:):)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Like the others ... first poem? Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    For your first poem that was amazing. the flow was great and the emtion was even strong enogh for a poem as short as this one. well done once more 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by rooney

    I luv this poem!!! just wondering...... whos demise it is that your planning??? but hey ur a really good writer!! keep writing!!!

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