What's a Friend?

by BeautifulxMess   Jan 25, 2007


I can't believe I fell for your stupid little lies.
Your pinkie swears and innocent faces.
You can't get me with your comfort anymore.
So stop waisting your breath on sorries.
Sorry doesn't cure anything anymore.
All I want is a friend, but what is that anyway?
What is it that is always there for you?
Who is it that you always run to for help?
What's that person called that has your back?
But that's the person who raided it.
What is a friend?
I don't think I'll ever know.
One things for sure,
It wasn't what you ever were.

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  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Aw. So deppressing... The structure was not... As it should be. The ABCB structure was no where to be found. its all over the place. Until I realized it was a Structure called "Free Writing of Emotions". Where you just write how you feel. I really saw your emotions. And i really felt your Sadness. It was not Excellent. But a good poem no doubt about it. voted 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by girl

    Lol. truee. friends are getting complicated. i LOVE it. ttly how i am feeling. 5//5 i am one for rhyming poems, but the ones that dont rhyme and get my attention means i think they're realy good. :D funny........i was reading your poem before you commented mine. Lol. [[tootles]] haha.