The real me

by Kaila   Jan 25, 2007


Everyone says that they want to be
But the pain inside they do not see
They say I'm better then the rest
If they only they knew how long I've been striving for the best
They dont know what goes on at home
They dont know that I cry all alone
They cant see the pain in my eyes
And it's all because of there stupid lies
They want to be so pretty and cool
But they dont see how I've made myself a fool
All they see is me with a fake smile
But I can only hide this pain for awhile

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's funny how we sometimes think we know people by looking at them, by judging them on the way they look. The truth is we might not even know all there is to know about our best friends, it's easy to hide behind a smile. Excellent job and great flow once again 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. this is so strong and beautiful. great job. reread it to find little errors.

    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    Wow. . .This is so powerful. . .This subject holds a special place for me because it is SO true. . good job#

    laura
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    Again your poem is filled with many emotions great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The first line does not make sense, i think. the poem was very insightful, i have felt like this.

    5 again from me. David

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