A defenceless mind

by XfromwithinX   Jan 28, 2007


Curled up and shrivelled,
the food not even nibbled.
Anorexia is ever so bad,
and it's sufferers are so very sad.
Taking over a defenceless mind,
becoming their first nature and very unkind.
Until they see their organs they'll never be satisfied,
at night they have just lied and cried.
They think they are fat but that's a lie,
and never again shall their hearts fly.
Abandoning all that is real,
ignoring what their stomachs truly feel.
Becoming their obsession,
leading them to depression.
Taking over a defenceless mind,
becoming their first nature and very unkind.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    That is really a great poem. i went through a stage where i was Anorexic and i know it was terrible! i love your poems...you are very talented!

    xoxo kisses

  • 17 years ago

    by Cherish

    Oh yeh n i hope u read my
    'does my bum look big in this' poem :) xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cherish

    Hehe i lyk
    n i like the - shrivlled-nibbled part (rhyming each of em together) made me giggle :) xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    Sound like they hae a bad digestion, i think Activmel can solve that and doctor said not to eat raw meat, lol. ok but really its really good and spooky, it should be a movie scenario. Alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    My latest poems are not posting
    under my page site problems
    they are called ANOTHER LAST CHANCE AND ALONE

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