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by Brittney   Jan 28, 2007


One little thing I could do,
To show I want the best for you.
To get rid of nagging, flirty, immature self.
You'll never know what I'm feeling,
Because I'm too stubborn to ask for help.
Something to do,
To show them that you're mine.
Something I wish I'd do all the time.
Foolish little mind of mine.
Tell me dear,
Is it a crime?
One little thing I can do,
To show I love you more than the rest.
I'll take this knife in the chest.

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  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Well written, the structure keeps being very original, but the morbidity of the theme made me a little confuse...no criticizing though, my own are pretty morbid as well...
    well, anyway...5/5

    *isabel*

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