The Sweetest Sin

by Daisy if you do   Jan 29, 2007


There is a tell tell sign,
That lies upon his hand,
The symbol of infinity,
Left by a golden band,
Just a circle of white,
Untouched by the sun,
Proudly he had wore it,
When their love begun,
Now it's just a memory
Stained upon his skin,
He sleeps with me and
dreams of her, it is his
Sweetest sin

M.K.S.
1/29/07

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is clever and flows perfectly. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is an excellent poem it reminds me of my father after my mothers death i could see these words comeing from his gf

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww this is so cute yet very heartbreaking I'm sorry about this nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    GREAT!!! i love it...it is so sad!

    xoxo kisses

  • 17 years ago

    by John Long

    The symbolism of - the golden band ....untouched by the sun - is exquisite. The wonderful contrast's continue with the great line 'He sleeps with me and
    dreams of her'.
    This is a beautiful bitter/sweet poem.

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