Could you live with yourself?

by Leanne   Jan 30, 2007


A beautiful life
Taken from us so soon
Through fault of another
That night brought only gloom

His life had just started
But on this dreadful night
Witnessed by many
Was a heart wrenching sight

The noise indescribable
He was hit with such force
The driver sped on
Did he not feel remorse?

As I approached his motionless body
Laying still on the ground
I searched for a pulse
It was not easily found

Staring into his eyes
As his life slipped away
Pleading with god to give him strength
To live for another day

Sadly my prayers weren't answered
In my arms he let out his last breath
From one person's drinking and driving
Had caused this boy's premature death.

~RIP Carl~

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  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    This was a powerful poem and reminded me of a kid in my schools car accident, I was a deep poem and very touching,....

  • 17 years ago

    by amelia

    Hey beautiful poem
    touched me deep within
    5/5
    love
    amy

    ps-the other two poems i cudnt comment cuz it keeps loggin off

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wowzers! this was sooooooo goood!!!! OMG! the detailing..the emotion..the flow....PERFECTION. wow....100/5 if that were possible. keep up the spectacular work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Erick

    Great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, very powerful poem, the emotion within was outstanding, wounderful write.

    Peace, Joe