Sweet dreams

by missy   Jan 31, 2007


I watch your eyes
and their lovely shine
I cry and moan
cuz they're not mine.
I watch your lips
curl into a smile
Oh how I would love
to kiss them a while.
Your hands they look
so gentle and strong
it's in my hands
where they belong.
Your arms are big
for you to hug
I fell in this hole
that you have dug.
I'm finally with you
I feel love of supreme
but as I awake
I knew what it had been,
another fantasy
in my sweet, sweet dreams.

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Some I love but who has someone else,....plz comment.

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  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    Great job. straight to the point. simplicity is a great technique. sweet job. ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Danielle

    Very elegantly written, the flow is perfect, when you wake up from the dream it stops aburptly, just as in real life when you realize its not really there.
    -danielle

  • 17 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Usually I don't like these love poems...But I loved this one..It made me feel like I was the one that was feeling it....Keep it up....5.0 From Me....

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Aww. That was sweet.
    Good job.