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Well done. title and ending of each line was awesome.

5/5 David

Um... thank you... I think... (my name is not joe... It's Kayomi...)

You know, Joe, there is something nearly satirical about these three poems.......poetic lines, perhaps, for characters in an off-broadway play about teenagers- who-write-poetry-on-poetry-sites kind of satirical.....
*note; your sense-of-humor will carry you through......