Why should I stay?

by Lauren   Feb 2, 2007


I wake up with hope but I don't know what for,
Maybe for happiness, just that nothing more.

My smile's are fake, when I laugh it's a lie,
I try to be happy but all I can do is cry.

I'm only truly happy at the sight of my own blood,
But even then the tears come down in a flood.

I feel as if I have no control,
I feel a part of me missing like I'll never be whole.

I'm forgetting the reasons why I should live,
I'm turning deaf to the excuses you give.

The fighting is getting harder to stand,
I rely on the blood drawn by my own hand.

Maybe my time in this place is done,
Maybe there's nothing left to do but run.

So give me one good reason to stay,
Because if you don't, goodbye is all I can say

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Haha, I know this sounds awkward but I'm running out of words to describe your poems. In fact I'm not even sure words can describe them XD
    xx Roxy

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Well...I'll miss u. Good enough?

  • 18 years ago

    by Xx KaYleY 2008 BaYbeE xX

    Hey this was great, sad but good and quite touching!! ;)!! if your depressed you'll pull through and i no it probably doesnt seem like that cos to me it doesnt but ive been told off so mant pple that you wil get better so keep ya chin up lass and hope things turn out gd 4 ya!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job!
    The emotion on this is great. Keep writing. Take Care Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I LOVED this!
    It was so very sad, but a joy to read.
    The imagery and wording were great and I enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme.
    You did a wonderful job.

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