by Dark Demise   Feb 2, 2007


A Strange new fusion
A Unforgettable dream
A Brand new illusion
A Undiscovered stream

Every new skrying moment, looking through the scope,
Glancing over you're shoulder for a slight chance of some hope,
Very troublesome situation in need of a cure,
A complicated truth. yet such a simple answer so pure,

looking through life in the blink of an eye,
It has become like clairvoyance,
The explanation deja vu doesn't satisfy,
Something so complex it's just become a disturbance,

I feel that all these thoughts make me deranged,
Paranoia isn't something that is easily tamed,
Just my little mystical perception that I keep,
I shudder at the hearing of the horror from the deep
Someday the tainted life style will fade,
And we can all stop living a charade,

And just sit down for a moment... and let are selves degrade.


Hope you enjoy it



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  • 13 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Thank you for all of your comments, and suggestions of things I need to work on, I really apreciate.

  • It's a pretty good poem, but it kind of breaks down into different things. The flow is good and the rhyming is good also. Kind of need to work on it, though. Good job!


  • 13 years ago

    by DJ

    This poem was awesome, love the vocab and structure, flowed nicely. good work.

  • 14 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Powerful... I love dark poetry, and your dark poems are truly excellent, very unique. I like the choice of words in this one, you painted some very vivid images in my mind.
    The fourth stanza is my favorite one.
    You did great job with rhyming, too.
    The ending line is very effective.
    5/5 from me

  • 14 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    This is a good poem! The ending bit was quite strong, that was my favorite part. The rhythm was twitchy, but you used a nice broad vocab. Always a great tool to have, if not overused.

    Keep it up.
    Take Care,

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