Lucid

by Tyler   Feb 3, 2007


Some say life is just a dream
Well you`v heard me scream
So let me tell you,its been tough
Can`t you see i`v had enough
This pain I can`t bear,hell you don't care,to try and wake me from this endless nightmare.But when I finally sleep,I begin to awaken,and it starts to feel like I can never be forsaken.A place in my mind,where everyones kind,the one thing in this so called ''life'' you`ll never find.Then I wake up,and the dream begins

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  • 16 years ago

    by DrowningNoises

    Trippy, and pretty damn good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

    keep it the great writting

    Chan
    -xx-

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    This was wonderful! 5/5
    It was the first of yours I've read and loved it. I hope that everything works out for you.
    The best, Morgana

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    Well done youngman. It flowed nicely. But you must understand that the teen years are very hard for most. It's the time in your life that you are try to find out who you are and what you want out of this life. May you find the peace and joy that you seek deep within your heart.

    sadaddy

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