Sweet Dreams

:D
love it

That was really sweet....short and sweet to be exact haha....really good....5/5...comment back!?

Huh. This is very interesting as well. I really like the way you think.
This is short, but very good. I'm baffled at what to say, just keep it up, whatever you're doing. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Veyr short yet a wonderful read. There was so much emotion, making the poem so very meaningful behind these words. I have to say i disliked the fact you started the poem with "And..", i dont know maybe thats just me. I think you should of used better punctuation through this though. You ended all of them with a commar and i think if you used enjambment or somethign similar it would of made this poem so much more better. Just my oppinion thought, keep writing! xx

I relaly like the first line. its really good. and the title is good as well. but its seems like its missing something. idk what or where its missing from it just seems incomplete... maybe after me telling you this you can figure it out. but great job.

:D