by *AsHeS* Feb 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
God only knows what happened to us |
by Brad Quammen
I really enjoyed how you made your words flow from one to the next.You have a talent in poetry.May you write many more. 5/5 |
by Im not broken anymore
Wow.. This is amazing... You can feel your pain keep it up 5/5 |
by LiveInMe
Great, Love It, Smooth Flow, Nice Rhymes, 5/5, what more can I say |
Very good, 5/5 and I'd like to see more of your poems soon :D |
by David
Wat a great poem. i like the way you set it out. |