My darkness

by firexdancer   Feb 6, 2007


Pick me up,
rock me slowly,
take away the pain,
and hold me.
don't let me fall,
just keep me with you,
and let me come,
when the last drop falls.
kiss me gently,
never let go,
for you'll forever be mine,
my darkness,
my lover.
my death.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I like it, it is short but greatly written. It creates superb image with powerful end. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    That was really nice! i dont really think its that sad tho! but i still loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by honeypot

    You are a fantastic writer. I have been reading your work and you inspire me!!

    Well done! you are awesome.

    Honeypot x

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    A dark poem yes packed with emotion and very natural you keep it simple and short which is great

  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    I really liked the feel you get when you read this poem. It had consistent flow, and the ending line really wrapped it up. I really liked how the rhymes never seemed force, it seemed natural, and it just went along with your flow. Great poem, I love the imagery.

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