She wasn't special

by Nil   Feb 8, 2007


She wasn't special, fast or strong
Weak and depressed she sang her song
Life was just too much to hold
Under its weight her body stood
Alone and breaking she cried
She prayed to God why can't I just die?
This world is crushing down on me
Clipping my wings, why can I be free?

Under the pressure she began to shake
Her whole entire body began to break
Bone by bone and hope by hope
The breath lost caught in her throat
She finally gave in, and her world crashed
It wasn't surprising she couldn't last
No one was there to help her through
So tell me if you saw her what would do?

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  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    I lvoe it.. its soo amazingly written. u have so much talent. i can also relate to this one.. ne wyas great poem. keep ur head high
    take care
    luve angie

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I really liked this. I could definately relate. The only thing that I would change is that you forgot 't to can't. other than that, wonderful!! 5/5

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