My Fall

by Fredy   Feb 9, 2007


One day i decided to end my life and cut my wrist.
An objective i didn't get to finish because of my brother's fist.
He hit me to wake me up.
He said he already called the cops.
"Keep him awake" they said.
Brother: I'm sorry you had to see me this way.
I know you were scared too because i heard you pray.
Do you really think he's up there i heard me say.
He said: why else do you think you're alive.
Then why did he let me suffer me, why?

We have to carry our own cross.
Do not let others be our life's boss.
No matter how slim the day looks.
No matter the how heavy the experience books.
you must always answer your heart when it calls.
Don't make the same mistake i did the day of my fall.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Hmm. nicely done. and pretty too... somehow. =)

    happy writin'

    -thanks for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Whoa! this poem is amazing, it has true feelings in it and the wording you used was unique.

    well done. 5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is very sad. You have written it wonderful. The message at the end hopefully will reach someone. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Blanca Yuri Hernandez

    Wow!!!I'm impressed

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Like ^^^ I agree you can really feel the words inside. very well written, keep it up! and thankx for the comment, it meant a lot to me! 5/5