Comments : My Valentine,My Love(For Valentine's Day)

  • 14 years ago

    by x!*Just wanna be loved*!x

    Very good poem! well done

  • 14 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well written flow is good very heart felt and full of emotion, imigery and all is good 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Elaine90

    Wow! Thats great! Keep it up. Holla Back

  • 14 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    Some spelling and grammar errors such as "foots(feet)" and "your night and me(mine) too."

    Fix those and you'll be good to go!

  • 14 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is soo good... love the way you expressed your feelings in the poem!!!
    very well written .,,, keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written, the flow as well as the structure was very good. The emotion within was good as well. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 14 years ago

    by Cayce

    I really enjoyed it. It was very passionate. The flow was pretty good. Overall good poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Make me a lot of hotter
    ^^ just one thing that I didn't understand.

    But other then that it's great. I really don't care for love poems unless they are lost love but this is one that i enjoyed. Have a Happy Valentines Day!

  • 14 years ago

    by Mousie

    It was good, but again the flow was off in a few parts, i had to reread some of it, it just wasn't smooth. you still have a talent in there, just check some of the poems over, you'll be a great writer some day.

  • 14 years ago

    by amoxi

    I liked hw this poem showed and love it is well written keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by In_Your_Eyes

    Thanks for the comment! Your poem is very sweet..nice job :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really i tried to undone that mistakes just after i submitted it,but it didn't work..it said that i editted my poem,but no changes,i tried so many times,i'm sorry but it isn't my mistake anymore

  • 14 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very, very good poem, love it, just put a space between the commas and the words, i give it a 5/5!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by robin milford

    Wow that was beautiful very romantic keep up the good work 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Aww once again a sweet poem! Just realised that I didn't even think to write a Valentines day one.

  • 14 years ago

    by amoxi

    Wow this was a wonderful poem it was very sweet and i like it a lot ur a good writer keep it up 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by just a little girl

    Out of the ones you requested to be read, I felt that this one was stronger, I like how you don't feel the need to rhyme like most people do and I am also guilty of. Very romantic 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by ryeann

    This was such a great poem, it was really deep, i loved it .. dont stop !!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Very sweet. It's a beautiful poem. There's a few grammar mistakes, but it's still a great read. 5/5

    marcella

  • 14 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Great emotion the flow is off but a good good good poem keep at it and work with it this could be great