New start.

by Anonymous Angel   Feb 14, 2007


There was a lonely girl,
in this cold world,
with wings of an angel
and shining like a pearl.

no one noticed her standing there,
no one cared,
they just didn't see,
her silent plea,

she cried for her loss,
and her leaving,
from heaven above,
the loss of her beloved.

now she was here in world,
missing her family and her throne,
she was never all alone,
let this be a lesson,she heard,

this was her fathers final word,
she would start all over again,
maybe then you would gain,
the value of life.

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  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Excellent 5/5 from me!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    very well done
    i like the fallen angel theme
    tis always a good theme to a poem
    the last stanza has a touch to a bad flow but that is all
    good job
    pleasure reading it:D:D

    keenan

  • 18 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Great flow and emotion. There's great depth in this piece. The rhyme scheme was strange but I liked it. Good write. 5/5

    marcella

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This poem has a great message. The flow was great, the word choice wonderful, and it all came together very nicely. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by IMMORTAL PAIN

    I love the second stanza. the flow was perfect, 5/5. i loved it. ur very talented

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