Happy Valentine's Day

by Ike Dizzle   Feb 14, 2007


Happy Valentines Day
From me to you
To the girl I like
Even after what you ll do

I m bracing myself
For the fall I will face
After being knocked down
In my own disgrace

Trying to treat you right
Being the person you yearned for
Laying here devastated
Feeling worst than before

Now I m feeling stupid
Because the girl I adored
Wanted some other guy
When she could have had more

Now I m dressed up
With nothing more to say
Sitting here all alone
On Valentines Day.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sander

    Really nice poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Awesome job!! The feelings conveyed in this poem are intense and something I'm sure we cal all relate to. Being alone and wishing for that someone. Amazing write :) :) 5/5

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Aww, that's so sad but heart break is apart of life i guess, anyway love the poem...great rythm (i can't spell :P) 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Wow.. Bay bay must really love this.. Damn, I kept reading other comments and all suddenly my eyes got blind because of baybay's comments.. Haha anyway.. This is so adorable, I wish u could not say it sad lonely in the end, cuz from the start is getting me smiling until I read down deepr gotten me frown BUT IT'S ADORABLE AND KUTE AS SAD ONES..

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Beautiful.
    this is why so many people dread v-day.
    wonderful job.

    thx for te comment by the way,
    it's always nice to get a comment from a good writer.

    well keep up the great work :)

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